Revisions fo the Amp

 

 

 

Hi, 


Thanks for creating this amp so quickly. I think is will certainly do a good job of getting the word out about the product.    I have underlined a few changes I would like to make. As I am an affiliate of Reading Head Start, I want to avoid the impression that it is my creation if Sarah the creator saw that,  I think she might go "bonkers" as the English say :-}   So below I have underlined some changes that could be made.  Also I checked and rechecked It seems the correct spelling of her name is Shepard so that will need to change.  So once the underlined  changes are made it should be good to go!


Thanks again for your help!

 


  
CHANGES FOR THE NEWS ARTICLE


Teaching My Kids, a Philadelphia-based educational resource for children, has launched a new reading program called Reading Head Start.
Perhaps replace "has launched"  with "has highlighted"


More information on the launch can be found by visiting https://teachingmykids.org
could replace "launch"  with "program"

The launch is ideally suited to parents who want to give their children a head start and has 
Perhaps replace "launch" with "program"
been created to teach children to read from as early as two and three years old. The company says the program uses a revolutionary method created by Sara Shepherd.

Sara Shepherd (Shepard) is a mother and English teacher who has been teaching children how to read for 14 years. Her years of experience have helped her to create a new teaching method that allows children to read and pronounce words in the English language before four and five years old, the age most children learn to read and write.

Parents will receive a simple, proven, and effective method that the company says is guaranteed to accelerate their child’s literacy skills and is suitable for children with dyslexia. The program lasts 40 weeks and is broken down into daily exercises and activities. It includes four learning phases and contains a series of worksheets, interactive activities, and educational videos.

As part of the launch, children will learn how to read clearly and articulately and will be able 
could replace "launch" with "program"
to confidently read out loud within 30 days of starting the program. The company says this program gives children a competitive advantage and that early literacy skills give children a huge head start when they begin schooling. They explain that much of a child’s future success is determined by their early learning and that the most important skill they need to master in these early years is the ability to read.

Interested parties can watch a 45-minute video about the program on the company’s website and enroll by selecting the ‘contact us’ tab.
could replace "enroll by selecting the contact us tab" to "enroll by following the instructions at the site"

Teaching My Kids is an online learning resource that provides educational tools for children. They specialize in helping children develop literacy skills and enable parents to become more involved in their child’s education. The company says over 36,000 children have used their methods to learn how to read so far.
perhaps replace "36,000  children have used their methods"  to "36,000 children have used 
Sara's methods"

For more information on the company and the launch of their Reading Head Start program visit https://teachingmykids.org


BELOW ARE SUGGESTED CHANGES FOR THE BLOG POST
Raise an overachiever, ensure your child's future success and give them the best start in life with the highly effective Reading Head Start program at Teaching My Kids!

Teaching My Kids, an educational resource for children that’s based in Philadelphia, has launched a new reading program called Reading Head Start.
perhaps change "has launched"   with  "has highlighted" 

Go to https://teachingmykids.org for more info.

The program is ideally suited to parents who want to give their children a head start and has been created to teach children to read from as early as two and three years old. The company says the program uses a revolutionary method created by Sara Shepherd.
Change to (Shepard)

Sara Shepherd (Shepard)is a mother and English teacher who has been teaching children how to read for 14 years. Her years of experience have helped her to create a new teaching method that allows your children to read and pronounce words in the English language before four and five years old, the age most children learn to read and write.

You will receive a simple, proven, and effective method that the company says is guaranteed to accelerate your child’s literacy skills and is suitable for children with dyslexia. The program lasts 40 weeks and is broken down into daily exercises and activities. It includes four learning phases and contains a series of worksheets, interactive activities, and educational videos.

As part of the launch, your child will learn how to read clearly and articulately and will be 
could replace " As part of the launch"  with "As part of the program"
able to confidently read out loud within 30 days of starting the program. The company says this program gives children a competitive advantage and that early literacy skills give children a huge head start when they begin schooling. They explain that much of a child’s future success is determined by their early learning and that the most important skill they need to master in these early years is the ability to read.


You can watch a 45-minute video about the program on the company’s website and enroll by selecting the ‘contact us’ tab.
could replace  "enroll  by selecting the contact us tab"  to "enroll by following the instructions on the site"

Teaching My Kids is an online learning resource that provides educational tools for children. They specialize in helping children develop literacy skills and enable parents to become more involved in their child’s education. The company says over 36,000 children have used their methods to learn how to read so far.
could replace "their methods"  with "Sarah's  methods"
Are you ready to give your child a head start?
For more info on the company and the launch of their Reading Head Start program go to https://teachingmykids.org

CHANGES TO SLIDE SHOW
I would make no changes to the slide show except in slide 6 where it says 
Teaching My Kids, an educational resource for children that’s based in Philadelphia, has launched a new reading program called Reading Head Start.
I would change    "has launched "   to "has highlighted"    also change any spelling s of shepeard to Shepard

I will leave the video and podcast as they are